Humpy Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Well done Bears, really pleased for you 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMballistic Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Well done Annie. My Mums actually in a welsh singing choir and she gets a lot of enjoyment out of it not to mention has made some great friends so I'm sure you'll have a great time. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twobears Posted October 3, 2014 Author Share Posted October 3, 2014 Thank you both SMD, great lyrics. Bit of a problem with the scansion in the second line but I will ask if I can do a solo and dedicate it to you at Christmas. It's bound to be a winner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spursmaddave Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Thank you both SMD, great lyrics. Bit of a problem with the scansion in the second line but I will ask if I can do a solo and dedicate it to you at Christmas. It's bound to be a winner 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leonk Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Thank you both SMD, great lyrics. Bit of a problem with the scansion in the second line but I will ask if I can do a solo and dedicate it to you at Christmas. It's bound to be a winner Scans MUCH better with..... " A gloved hand on her knee " Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leonk Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 I'm wafting in my car A gloved hand on her knee Peasants all around, wishing they were me People gaze, opened mouthed Taken by surprise A handsome man, in a Jag, they can't believe their eyes... Fixed 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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