Oops, missed this.
Extensive history: Give me dates, mileage and locations.
Common problems fixed: Just the two mentioned?
Which clutch was put in? When? By who?
Which rad fans? When? By who?
Couple of usual marks, where? Pics?
Your listing is all wrong too, one big paragraph is difficult to scan. Try listing mods like this:
Greddy induction kit
Greddy front strut brace
Invidia Gemini exhaust
Tein S Tech lowering springs
etc.
You put 'Big brembos', well they're just the stock ones aren't they? plus Brembo should be capitalised. Carbon gear shift and Carbon engine cover should not have capitalised Cs if in a paragraph, and it's a gear knob not a gear shift. Actually you've capitalised after every comma, that's the bigger issue.
E2 DLJ is clearly a private plate, is that coming with the car? If not take it off, get the original plate back on and get some photos that aren't either over or under exposed. Choose a single location too, go find a nice park somewhere or a country road layby. Be consistent!
Apart from that it's fine.