Yep it's there Keith.
Great pictures & a nice video but tbh you've not exactly put a lot into the advert to grab buyers attention (no offence intended).
Personally I think you need to bullet point all the good bits and explain a little bit about the car & how it's been looked after.
Like it states new tyres, ...what tyres where fitted? If it's a cheap set of ditch finders then no buyers going to like that but if it's a half decent set then they can see you look after the car.
I'd also list the mileage that services have been done & what has been done etc. Just things like that so that your Zed will stand out from all the other Zeds advertised not just on here but also Autotrader, Pistonheads, GumTree etc etc.
Food for thought I hope and GLWTS.